when is the best age to be?
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Hi Lion,
How\'s your day?
You\'ve been consistently diligent in answering your homework since we started our class. Thank you!
It\'s also noticeable how much thought you\'ve put in your composition. It\'s personalized and your effort in justifying your views with regards to the topic is commendable.
As for your grammar, I made a few revision. Please check. Thank you.
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Amanda:)
Age doesn\'t matter at all.
>> Correct
Age is just number.
>> Age is just a number.
Only you can know how old I am, when Parents, doctor or other people would say how old you are.
>> With the exclusion of your parents, your doctor and other people who knows about your age, only you can know how old you are.
*** Lion, I\'m not sure exactly what you\'re trying to point out in this particular statement, so the revision I made is not yet final. We\'ll talk about this during our class later tonight.
Final revision based on what you explained during class: When babies are born, they couldn\'t care less about how old they are, but their parents, the doctors and other people cares about it very much .
Because, When someone himself or herself didn`t care how old himself or herself.
>> It doesn\'t really matter how young or how old you are, so long as you don\'t make a big deal out of your age.
Or
>> Age is simply what you make of it.
Sometimes Age is matter, when people need to prove(?) or show themself how old people is likes official documents.
>>There are instances where age matters, like when you are dealing with legal documents and the likes; other than that, age is just really a number.
When I had been in aussie. They never asked me how old I am, and I didn`t care how old I am too. We are just friend or co-worker.
>> When I was in Australia, they never asked me how old I am, so I didn\'t really care how old I am too. Age has never been an issue. We are just friends or co-workers.
I have a friend who`s age over 60, or teenager I`m not sure, because I didn`t ask my friends How old you are. We just FRIENDS!.
>> I have a friend whose age is over 60, or maybe younger, I\'m not sure. My point is, I never ask my friends how old they are. We\'re friends no matter what our age are.
As same. there is no best age to be or to do. Only matter is HOW MUCH DO YOU WANT TO BE. OR TO DO! Agian. Age is just number.
>> Since age doesn\'t matter, there is really no best age to be. The only thing that matters is what you want to be and how much effort you want to do to become what you want to be. Again, age is just a number.
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