When is the best time for you to spend time with your family and friends?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to spend times going to a travel with my family and friends.
Because a travel makes relationships refreshed and special.
And those could be the best memories in my life.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Julia!
Happy heart\'s day :) Live your life to the fullest while you are young :)
Thanks for sharing your thought!
T. Aki~
I like to spend times going to a travel with my family and friends.
>>> I like to spend time traveling with my family and friends.
Because a travel makes relationships refreshed and special.
Because a travel makes relationships refreshed and special.
>>> Because traveling revives relationship.
And those could be the best memories in my life.
>>> CORRECT!
And those could be the best memories in my life.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> And it\'s one of the best memories I had and would have.
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