When is the best time for you to spend time with your family and friends?
학생이 쓴 원문
I’ve lived in Seoul alone since I started to work. And my family are living in Dontan where I take one hour to go. So, during working It’s hard to visit to my parents house. In addition, there are nothing to do like hanging out with someone except meeting my family. Because I grow up in Incheon. Therefore I pretend to spend time with my family as I have enough time. If I get long holiday, I go to parents house. In the other hand, My friends are living near my home. So I can meet them easily. I’m used to hanging out with them on weekends.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Yoon!
I\'ve lived in Seoul alone since I started to work. And my family are living in Dontan where I take one hour to go.
>>> I’ve lived in Seoul alone since I started to work, and my family are living in Dontan which is an hour away.
So, during working It’s hard to visit to my parents house.
>>> correct
In addition, there are nothing to do like hanging out with someone except meeting my family.
>>> OR: In addition, there is nothing fun to do like hanging out with someone except meeting my family.
Because I grow up in Incheon, Therefore I pretend to spend time with my family as I have enough time.
>>> Because I grew up in Incheon, I pretend to spend time with my family as I have enough time.
If I get long holiday, I go to parents house.
>>> If I get a long holiday, I go to my parents\' house.
In the other hand, My friends are living near my home. So I can meet them easily.
>>> On the other hand, my friends are living near my home so I can meet them easily.
I’m used to hanging out with them on weekends.
>>> correct
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