When is the best time for you to spend time with your family and friends?
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ESSAY QUESTION: When is the best time for you to spend time with your family and friends?
My children, one son and daughter each, already got married and they are living apart from me.
>>My children, a son and a daughter, are already married and they are living independently from us.
They also are living in Seoul but all of them including their spouses are working.
>>They also are living in Seoul and all of them, including their spouses, are working.
or>>The two of them are also residing in Seoul, and they all have jobs just like their spouses.
Therefore, the best time to spend with my family depends on their situation not myself and my wife\'s.
CORRECT!
>>Thus, the most convenient time for us to spend with them depends on their schedules. We have to work our schedules around theirs.
They come to my house to see us on some weekend days.
>>They come to my house to see us on some weekends.
or>>They come visit us at home on some weekends.
So, weekend days are the best time to speend with them.
>>So, weekends are the best time to spend with them.
or>> So, the most suitable time to hang out with them are on weekends.
On the other hand, the best time to meet with my friends is during weekdays because most of them left their jobs now.
CORRECT!
>>On the contrary, the most opportune time to see my friends is on weekdays. Since a number of them are now retired from their jobs.
In fact, we avoid to meet on weekend days except for unavoidable case as possible.
>>In fact, we avoid to meet on weekends as much as possible, except for unavoidable cases.
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