When is the best time to go shopping?
학생이 쓴 원문
It is better to shop on weekdays than on weekends.
On weekends, many people take a rest and go out to shop on busy weekdays.
So if you shop with them, you won\'t be able to choose your clothes properly.
People in the shop are crowded and I will have to wait a long time even if I want to wear clothes.
And it will be more difficult than usual thanks to people\'s energy.
So I like shopping on weekdays, especially on weekdays when I have no schedule.
I can choise clothes comfortably, and wear them a lot before I buy them because there are hardly people.
강사 첨삭
It is better to shop on weekdays than on weekends.
>> CORRECT!
On weekends, many people take a rest and go out to shop on busy weekdays.
>> On weekends, many people take a rest and go out to shop.
So if you shop with them, you won\'t be able to choose your clothes properly.
>> CORRECT!
People in the shop are crowded and I will have to wait a long time even if I want to wear clothes.
>>The shops are crowded with people and I will have to wait a long time even if I want to try out some clothes.
And it will be more difficult than usual thanks to people\'s energy.
>> And it will be more difficult than usual thanks to all the people\'s energies.
So I like shopping on weekdays, especially on weekdays when I have no schedule.
>> CORRECT!
I can choise clothes comfortably, and wear them a lot before I buy them because there are hardly people.
>> I can choose clothes comfortably, and wear them a lot before I buy them because there are hardly any people.
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