When is the best time to visit Korea?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I am sorry. I forgot to make a composition as your homework.
I think, if you visit Korea, please come winter season.
As far as I know, your country is not winter. so you may have no chance to meet snow.
if you come to Korea in winter season, you can enjoy ski. it is very fast and scare but it is very fun.
From the mountain, you can slide down by ski. I think, it will be a great experience to you.
I hope you come to Korea in winter season really.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]~
It\'s okay, if you forget your homework. Don\'t worry about it. Anyway, you did great and thank you for doing it.
It\'s okay, if you forget your homework. Don\'t worry about it. Anyway, you did great and thank you for doing it.
Here are your corrections:
I am sorry.
>> CORRECT
I forgot to make a composition as your homework.
I think, if you visit Korea, please come winter season.
As far as I know, your country is not winter. so you may have no chance to meet snow.
If you come to Korea in winter season, you can enjoy ski.
From the mountain, you can slide down by ski.
I hope you come to Korea in winter season really.
>> I forgot to do my homework.
>> I think, it would be better for you to visit Korea in winter season.
>> As far as I know, your country don\'t have winter season so you don\'t have a chance to experience snow.
>> CORRECT
it is very fast and scare but it is very fun.
>> It is very fast and scary but it\'s very fun.
>> From the mount, you will slide down using the ski.
I think, it will be a great experience to you.
>> I think, it will be a great experience for you.
>> I hope you can really come to Korea in winter season.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.