When is the first thing that you always do when you visit a new place?
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When I visit a new place that I always ask front desk about daily activities,
and then check around gym, and restaurants.
We love travel to cruise ,because very safe, good food, and then there are included for everything. I have been cruise with my family couple of times,also short time can see many place.most American love cruise,especially elderly people.
I made my bucket list. One day I want to go all over the world with my husband.
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When I visit a new place that I always ask front desk about daily activities,
and then check around gym, and restaurants.
and then check around gym, and restaurants.
>> Whenever I visit a new place, I would always ask the front desk about the available activities and then check the amenities around.
We love travel to cruise ,because very safe, good food, and then there are included for everything.
We love travel to cruise ,because very safe, good food, and then there are included for everything.
>> We love cruise trips because it is very safe, serves good food and everything is inclusive already.
I have been cruise with my family couple of times,also short time can see many place.
>> I have been to cruise trips with my family couple of times.
most American love cruise,especially elderly people.
>> Most Americans love cruising, especially elderly people.
I made my bucket list.
I made my bucket list.
>> CORRECT
One day I want to go all over the world with my husband.
>> CORRECT
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