When is the moment we became dishonest?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think there is no one who didn't tell a lie even one time.
I confirm that that kinds of people are not existing.
We have had some lies in our life, since we born.
because in our time of youth, we wanted to avoid a special situations.
When we found something good on the street, we picked it up and when the owner came, we told him that I don't know. It is common things. I think.
In case of hiding something such as the resulf of test, we oftenly tell our parents lie that we don't recieve it yet.
The reason why we talk lie to other is that we want to avoid from some kind of responsiblity or duty.
It's not a big deal, but we were afraid about it or felt fear from the test.
So that's why our liying is especially gethered in our youth time and now we can deal with it. so we can admitt what we have done.
It is the time to handle what we did, what we've done. That is the main factor of mature person.
강사 첨삭
Hello again!
Thanks for giving examples in order to elaborate your answer.
I am so thankful that you always see to it that you get your point across.
I agree with you but we should avoid telling lies.
It is not good. Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
>> I think there\'s no one who didn\'t tell a lie even once.
I confirm that that kinds of people are not existing.
I confirm that that kinds of people are not existing.
>> I want to say that this kind of people doesn\'t exist.
We have had some lies in our life, since we born.
We have had some lies in our life, since we born.
>> correct
because in our time of youth, we wanted to avoid a special situations.
because in our time of youth, we wanted to avoid a special situations.
>> Because in our time, we wanted to avoid special situations.
When we found something good on the street, we picked it up and when the owner came, we told him that I don\'t know.
When we found something good on the street, we picked it up and when the owner came, we told him that I don\'t know.
>> When we find something good on the street, we picked it up and when the owner came, we told hi/ her that we don\'t know anything about that.
It is common things. I think.
>> I think its common.
In case of hiding something such as the resulf of test, we oftenly tell our parents lie that we don\'t recieve it yet.
In case of hiding something such as the resulf of test, we oftenly tell our parents lie that we don\'t recieve it yet.
>> Did you mean: In terms of hiding something such as the result of a test, we often tell our parents a lie that we didn\'t receive it yet.
The reason why we talk lie to other is that we want to avoid from some kind of responsiblity or duty.
The reason why we talk lie to other is that we want to avoid from some kind of responsiblity or duty.
>> The reason why we tell a lie to others is that we wanted to avoid some responsibilities.
It\'s not a big deal, but we were afraid about it or felt fear from the test.
It\'s not a big deal, but we were afraid about it or felt fear from the test.
>> It\'s not a big deal, but we are afraid about it.
So that\'s why our liying is especially gethered in our youth time and now we can deal with it. so we can admitt what we have done.
So that\'s why our liying is especially gethered in our youth time and now we can deal with it. so we can admitt what we have done.
>> Did you mean: So that\'s why lying is normal nowadays. So, we can admit what we have done.
It is the time to handle what we did, what we\'ve done.
It is the time to handle what we did, what we\'ve done.
>> correct
That is the main factor of mature person.
>> That\'s the perception of a mature person.
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