When makes you happy?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like drawing pictures. Beacause when I\'m drawing pictures,I\'m always happy.
I\'m happy when I eat delicious food.Beacause when I eat delicious food,I feel good and it makes power.
And I love food!!!
강사 첨삭
Hello, Grace ^^
Thank you for doing your very first homework here at Power English!
Keep it up! ^^
- T. Rina
1. I like drawing pictures.
>> CORRECT!
2. Beacause when I\'m drawing pictures, I\'m always happy.
>> Because when I\'m drawing pictures, I\'m always happy.
OR: Because I always feel happy when I draw pictures.
3. I\'m happy when I eat delicious food.
>> CORRECT!
4. Beacause when I eat delicious food, I feel good and it makes power.
>> Because when I eat delicious food, I feel good and it gives me power.
5. And I love food!!!
>> CORRECT!
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