when making a decision, which one is better?
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It depends on things like situations. But I usually consider other opinions quite much because I cannot be firm when I have things to choose, which I think is one of my defectives. These days, however, I\'m trying to be firm and lead myself when it comes to a decision for my life. It would be great if I could make a decision listening to others and self-directed properly at the same time.
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Good evening, [이름]!^^
Thank you for doing your homework. It\'s nice to put your thoughts into words and it will also a good practice to improve your grammar and writing skills. ^_^
It depends on things like situations.
>>> It depends on the situations.
But I usually consider other opinions quite much because I cannot be firm when I have things to choose, which I think is one of my defectives.
>>> But I usually consider other people\'s opinions quite much because I cannot be firm when choosing things, which I think is one of my flaws.
These days, however, I\'m trying to be firm and lead myself when it comes to a decision for my life.
>>> These days, however, I\'m trying to be firm and lead myself when it comes to my life decisions.
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