When married people talk about having children they talk about “starting a family”. Can two married

2015-04-27 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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When we look up a dictionary, the definition of family has many meanings.A family is primarily a group of individuals living under one roof and usually under one head. Another definition is that a family is the basic unit in society traditionally consisting of two parents rearing their children. Sure, it's politically correct to talk about all kinds of formations such as two moms and a child, a dad and a child, a childless couple with three cats, etc. But that's not what most people mean by "family." What really makes a family? I think it's a group of people you can count on and feel completely at home with because you're all woven from the same cloth. You usually share a history, culture, beliefs and biology, but maybe you can make a family without the biology part. I see so many couples without kids.The number of couples who choose their lives without kids are increasing due to the high cost to raise kids. However, regardless of the definition of family, can we be happy without kids?

강사 첨삭

Hi there Sir [이름]!

Happy Monday! How are you?

Did you have a great time last weekend?

Did you go to your parents\' house?

I am so excited to hear your stories.
I actually had a wonderful time with my friends. ^^

Anyway, I think we can be happy even without kids.

As long as you love each other and you think about your dreams together.

Kids make us happy, but there might be situations that it is difficult to have kids.

We should just love each other and make the most of our time.

Teacher Nina


When we look up a dictionary, the definition of family has many meanings.

>> correct

A family is primarily a group of individuals living under one roof and usually under one head.

>> correct

Another definition is that a family is the basic unit in society traditionally consisting of two parents rearing their children.

>> correct

>> Another definition is that a family is the basic unit in the society, traditionally consisting of two parents rearing their children.

Sure, it\'s politically correct to talk about all kinds of formations such as two moms and a child, a dad and a child, a childless couple with three cats, etc.

>> correct

But that\'s not what most people mean by \"family.\"

>> correct

What really makes a family?

>> correct

I think it\'s a group of people you can count on and feel completely at home with because you\'re all woven from the same cloth.

>> correct

You usually share a history, culture, beliefs and biology, but maybe you can make a family without the biology part.

>> correct

I see so many couples without kids.

>> correct

The number of couples who choose their lives without kids are increasing due to the high cost to raise kids.

>> correct

However, regardless of the definition of family, can we be happy without kids?

>> correct

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