When people are wealthy or successful, do they have a special responsibility to help others?
학생이 쓴 원문
They don\'t have a responsibility to help others.
It\'s because it is a fact that they work harder than others.
But they would help others if they are wise.
If they sell some products, there should be clients.
If they are politicians, there should be citizens.
I think the wiser people, the more help others.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Ian! Thank you for doing your homework. You
were able to construct sentences with proper grammar. Great job!
- Debbie
>> They don\'t have the responsibility to help others.
It\'s because it is a fact that they work harder than others.
>> This is a good sentence.
But they would help others if they are wise.
>> However, if they are wise, they will help others.
If they sell some products, there should be clients.
>> This is a good sentence.
If they are politicians, there should be citizens.
>> This is a good sentence.
I think the wiser people, the more help others.
>> I think the wiser people are, the more they can help others.
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