“When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.?

2016-11-16 · 첨삭 강사 Megan

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In my opinion, main reason of people's succeed is their hard work. however i believe also luck partly influence on it. For example, In my case I am planning to have a cetificate test on december. It is a test how well we deal with machine and it has time limit. Even if we practice hard for this test, if i make a mistake because of nervous, I will fail for this test. Therefore I stronly believe that luck partly influence on people's succeed.

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Hi [이름]!!Great Tuesday evening!!   I\'m so happy to read your answer. You do not come across success just by hoping for it. To achieve true success, you need the strength of mind and body to struggle and work hard to reach your fullest potential.   You need the right attitude, self-discipline and the ability to put your goal before your own needs, if you are really driven towards reaching success. There is, after all no substitute for hard work, and as Henry Ford says, \'The harder you work, the luckier you get\'   Many students, of all ages, feel nervous, scared, or even panicky on exam day. This is a well-known phenomenon called test anxiety. At a time which matters the most, you may feel your worst. While it is normal to feel some tension before your test, feeling too nervous can interfere with your thinking processes and have a negative effect on your exam performance. To turn the situation around and perform at your best, it is necessary to learn how to manage your stress successfully. I believe you can manage it ^^ Never give up!! ~Teacher Megan~ \"Nothing ever comes to one, that is worth having, except as a result of hard work. -Booker T. Washington\"   Here are my corrections: In my opinion, main reason of people\'s succeed is their hard work.>>> In my opinion, one main reason why people succeed is their hard work.OR>>> In my opinion, one main reason of people\'s succees is their hard work.   however i believe also luck partly influence on it. >> However, I also believe that luck partly has an influence on it. OR>>> However, I also believe that luck has somnething to do with it.   For example, In my case I am planning to have a cetificate test on December. >>> Correct.   It is a test how well we deal with machine and it has time limit. >>> It is a test on how well we deal with machines and it has a time limit. Even if we practice hard for this test, if i make a mistake because of nervous, I will fail for this test. >>> Even if we practice hard for this test, if I make a mistake because of being nervous, I will fail the test. OR>>> Even if we practice hard for this test, if I make a mistake because of my nerves , I will fail the test. Therefore I stronly believe that luck partly influence on people\'s succeed. >>> Therefore I strongly believe that luck can partly influence people\'s success.

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