When shopping, do you often look for cheaper alternatives?
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Yes. First I browse for same one by my smartphone. Sometimes they sell on[이름]e more cheaper like using coupons. Therefore I also buy in on[이름]e when I already wore it off[이름]e. Second when there\'s no more cheaper one which is same, then I search for similar one. Because of trend, there are many clothes with similar designs in many shopping malls.
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]! Great strategy! Browsing on[이름]e for deals and exploring similar options when needed can really save you money.
~T. Jenna
Yes. First I browse for same one by my smartphone.
>>Yes. First, I browse for the same one on my smartphone.
OR
>>Certainly. Initially, I utilize my smartphone to search for an identical item
Sometimes they sell on[이름]e more cheaper like using coupons.
>>Sometimes, they sell on[이름]e at a lower price due to available coupons.
Therefore I also buy in on[이름]e when I already wore it off[이름]e.
>>Therefore, I also buy on[이름]e when I have already wore / tried it on off[이름]e.
Second when there\'s no more cheaper one which is same, then I search for similar one.
>>Second, when there\'s no cheaper one that is the same, I search for a similar one.
Because of trend, there are many clothes with similar designs in many shopping malls.
Correct, or
>>Given the influence of popular trends, many clothing items with similar designs can be found across various shopping malls.
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