when someone borrowed something

2020-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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It seems to be different in each case. If someone is a close friend I can wait for him so that he can handle it. If I don`t know him well I want help from the law. or I`d like to settle it according to the customarily. It`s can also vary depending on the amount of money. In my experience, It`s better not to borrow personality as much as possible Especially when I lend a close friend I felt like we grew apart.

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Hello Mrs. [Name]!
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Here are your corrections:

It seems to be different in each case.
>> CORRECT

If someone is a close friend I can wait for him so that he can handle it.
>> If that someone is a close friend, I can wait for him so that he can handle it.

If I don`t know him well I want help from the law. or I`d like to settle it according to the customarily.
>> If I don\'t know him well, I want a help from the law or I\'d like to settle it accordingly.

It`s can also vary depending on the amount of money.
>> It can also vary depending on the amount of money borrowed.

In my experience, It`s better not to borrow personality as much as possible
Especially when I lend a close friend I felt like we grew apart.
>> In my experience, it\'s better to not not borrow as much as possible or lending to a close friend who I felt like we grew apart.

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