When swimming, Do you prefer a calm sea or do you prefer big waves?
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I totally prefer a calm sea. Because I\'m scared of swimming in a sea. So, I prefer a calm sea than big waves.
I can fo into the sea only row level.
If it\'s level so high, I will not easily breath. I think I\'m scared of water.
But I can happily swim in the sea, when I swim with my friends or boyfriend.
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I totally prefer a calm sea.
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Because I\'m scared of swimming in a sea.
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So, I prefer a calm sea than big waves.
>>CORRECT
I can fo into the sea only row level.
>> I can only swim in shallow levels.
If it\'s level so high, I will not easily breath.
>> If it\'s deep, I might get drowned.
I think I\'m scared of water.
>>CORRECT
But I can happily swim in the sea, when I swim with my friends or boyfriend.
>>CORRECT
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