When the wind blows
학생이 쓴 원문
When the wind blows the tree dance.
When the wind blows the flowers shake thier body.
When the wind blows grasses wriggle like a caturpila.
When the wind blows people wear coats and jackets.
When the wind blows animal don't wear coats or jackets because they have fur.
강사 첨삭
Hello there!^_^
Happy Friday!
Wow! This like a poem. Is this a poem? I really like the idea that you just write about anything under the sun. It doesn\'t only enhance your writing skills but all it sharpens your talent to compose an essay or a poem which you can compile and turn into a book someday.^_^
Thank you so much for this composition. I enjoyed reading it.
~T. Mayleen~
When the wind blows the tree dance.
>> When the wind blows the tree dances.When the wind blows the flowers shake thier body.
>> When the wind blows the flowers shake their bodies.When the wind blows grasses wriggle like a caturpila.
>> When the wind blows grasses wriggle like caterpillars.When the wind blows people wear coats and jackets.
>> Correct!When the wind blows animal don\'t wear coats or jackets because they have fur.
>> When the wind blows animals need not wear coats nor jackets because the have furs.
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