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2014-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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People tend to dishonest when they are in a trouble. because they want to run away from loss or responsibility. For example, when a thief is caught , he/she want to be free and try to lie so that he can avoid this situation. I also lied When I was young especially in elementary school. because of forgetting homework, I was often scolded by my teacher. To avoid that situation, I said to teacher that I did homework but I didn't get it in my bag. but it is not good. Telling the truth is the best way to solve a problem. the best way to avoid embarrassing situation is don't let make matter worse. and try your best

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Hello [이름]! How are you today? Are you having a great day? Thank you for doing your homework. I totally agree with you. We should handle our problems in a mature way. We should always be honest to avoid problems. Talk to you soon. Have a wonderful day. Teacher Nina   People tend to dishonest when they are in a trouble. >> People tend to be dishonest when they are in trouble.because they want to run away from loss or responsibility. >> Correct!For example, when a thief is caught , he/she want to be free and try to lie so that he can avoid this situation.>> For example, when a thief is caught, he/ she wants to be free and tries to lie so that he can avoid the situation. I also lied When I was young especially in elementary school. >> Correct! >> OR: I also lied when I was an elementary school student. because of forgetting homework, I was often scolded by my teacher. >> Because I forgot to do my homework, I was often scolded by my teacher. To avoid that situation, I said to teacher that I did homework but I didn\'t get it in my bag. >> To avoid that situation, I told my teacher that I did my homework but I forgot to put in my bag. >> OR: To avoid the situation, I told my teacher that I did it but I forgot to bring it. but it is not good. >> Correct! Telling the truth is the best way to solve a problem. >> Correct!the best way to avoid embarrassing situation is don\'t let make matter worse. and try your best >> The best way to avoid an embarrassing situation is not ot let the matter worse and try your best to solve it. >> OR: The best way is to avoid the situation to worsen and try your best to solve it.

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