When was a time that you felt lucky or blessed?
학생이 쓴 원문
To be honest with you, I think my whole life is all lucky and blessed. Most of all, I feel like the god gave me best parents ever in the world. My mom and dad never fight each other. In fact, I have never seen they are fighting in the entire life so my house is filled with warmth and laughter everyday. They are actually super positive people. Besides, my mother always tries to understand me and give me what I want for me. Also I live a great house where I feel loved, happy and safe with my amazing family.
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T. DON
To be honest with you, I think my whole life is all lucky and blessed.
Most of all, I feel like the god gave me best parents ever in the world.
My mom and dad never fight each other. In fact, I have never seen they
are fighting in the entire life so my house is filled with warmth and
laughter everyday. They are actually super positive people. Besides, my
mother always tries to understand me and give me what I want for me.
Also I live a great house where I feel loved, happy and safe with my
amazing family.
>> To be honest with you, I think my whole life is all luck and blessed.
Most of all, I feel like God gave me the best parents ever in the world.
My mom and dad never fight each other. In fact, I have never seen them fighting in my entire life so my house is filled with warmth and
laughter every day. They are actually super positive people. Besides, my
mother always tries to understand me and give me what I want.
Also I live in a great house where I feel loved, happy and safe with my
amazing family.
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