When was the happiest day of your life and why was it very happy?

2021-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Roanne

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I am usually happy in many days. But I have to choose, I would like to say these day. When I was high school student, I did educational volunteering. I met a students who lacked dictation. I feel really bad for him. So, I gave the picture books that he enjoyed. And I had the student study the word in picture books. Additionally, I made the word sheet for him. As a result, his dictation score was getting better. This day is I felt rewarded the most. I think teacher can give good influence to students. That\'s moment I determined what kind of teacher I should be too.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Sally! 

Oh, that\'s actually good to hear.  I miss you. We\'ll meet soon.

Thank you for sharing. See you! 

~T. Roanne ^_^
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I am usually happy in many days. 
>> Correct!
But I have to choose, I would like to say these day. 
>> But If I have to choose, I would like to say these days. 
When I was high school student, I did educational volunteering. 
>> When I was a high school student, I did educational volunteering. 
I met a students who lacked dictation. I feel really bad for him. 
>> I met a student who lacked dictation. I felt really bad for him. 
So, I gave the picture books that he enjoyed. And I had the student study the word in picture books. 
>> So, I gave the picture books that he enjoyed and I had the student study the words in the  picture books. 
Additionally, I made the word sheet for him. 
>> Additionally, I made a word sheet for him. 
As a result, his dictation score was getting better. 
>> Correct!
This day is I felt rewarded the most. 
>> Correct!
I think teacher can give good influence to students. 
>> I think a teacher can give good influence to students. 
That\'s moment I determined what kind of teacher I should be too.
>> That moment I determined what kind of a teacher, I should be too.

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