When was the last time you achieved a goal? How did you feel?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, I envied my friends who played the piano.
So when I quited the job, I determined to learn to play the piano on my own.
I played the piano more than 7 hours a day every day.
I was finally able to play one piano song.
I was so excited and even tried another song.
It took me a long time to complete one piano song.
But I was so happy that I finally did it and so proud of myself.
Now I know the joy of sucess after a challenge.
I want to try many challenges in the future.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jennifer!
Go for all the challenges, I think it\'s what makes our life more interesting :)
When I was young, I envied my friends who played the piano.
>>> CORRECT!
So when I quited the job, I determined to learn to play the piano on my own.
>>> So I decided to learn piano by myself when I quit my job.
I played the piano more than 7 hours a day every day.
>>> CORRECT!
I was finally able to play one piano song.
>>> CORRECT!
I was so excited and even tried another song.
>>> CORRECT!
It took me a long time to complete one piano song.
>>> It took me a long time to complete one song.
But I was so happy that I finally did it and so proud of myself.
>>> CORRECT!
Now I know the joy of sucess after a challenge.
>>> Now I know the joy of success after the challenge.
I want to try many challenges in the future.
>>> CORRECT!
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