When was the last time you achieved a goal? How did you feel?
학생이 쓴 원문
I achieved my goal of walking more than 10000 steps every day. There are three reason for having this goal. First, I wanted to develop physical strength during vacation. Second, I wanted to break the habit of lazy when I was stay home. Finally, I less move than during semester, so I do it to maintain my weight. When I see myself trying to achieve my goal, I\'m most proud. Also, after achieving the goal I feel a sense of accomplishment and self-esteem.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Sandy!
Nice achievement! I hope that you will continue this as part of your routine :)
See you later!
I achieved my goal of walking more than 10000 steps every day.
>>> CORRECT!
There are three reason for having this goal.
>>> There are three reasons for having this goal.
First, I wanted to develop physical strength during vacation.
>>> First, I wanted to develop my physical strength during the vacation.
Second, I wanted to break the habit of lazy when I was stay home.
>>> Second, I wanted to break the lazy habit when I am at home.
Finally, I less move than during semester, so I do it to maintain my weight.
>>> Finally, I move less than during the semester, so I do it to maintain my weight.
When I see myself trying to achieve my goal, I\'m most proud.
>>> CORRECT!
Also, after achieving the goal I feel a sense of accomplishment and self-esteem.
>>> CORRECT!
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