When was the last time you attended a wedding? Tell me something unique.
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t remember exactly but maybe when I was in elementary school, I went my uncle\'s wedding. In the wedding, my uncle\'s friends sang a song to congratulate him.
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]!
In the past, here in my country, a couple usually released a dove during the wedding celebration however, due to animal rights and protection, people no longer do that ( I don\'t know in the countryside) These days, a lot of couples want their weddings to be notable, so they try to coordinate with wedding planners to make their weddings unique. It\'s their wedding anyway, so they can do anything they want, Enjoy your day!
T. Aki~
I don\'t remember exactly but maybe when I was in elementary school, I went my uncle\'s wedding.
>>> I don\'t remember exactly, but maybe when I was in elementary school, I went to my uncle\'s wedding.
In the wedding, my uncle\'s friends sang a song to congratulate him.
>>> At the wedding, my uncle\'s friends sang a song to congratulate him.
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