When was the last time you felt proud of yourself?
학생이 쓴 원문
A few days ago, I got a No.1 Division in the game that I play everyday.
No. 1 Division is below 0.4% of all players.
So, I felt proud of my skills.
강사 첨삭
Hi! I’m delighted you dedicated time to completing the homework. You did a wonderful job expressing your experiences—keep up the great effort!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
A few days ago, I got a No.1 Division in the game that I play everyday.
>>A few days ago, I reached No. 1 in the division of the game I play every day.
No. 1 Division is below 0.4% of all players. So, I felt proud of my skills.
>>The No. 1 division represents the top 0.4% of all players, so I felt proud of my skills.
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