When was the last time you felt that you were broke?
학생이 쓴 원문
Teacher Aki! I\'m sorry to be late in homework!
Q. When was the last time you felt that you were broke?
A. I felt broke in last year. Because, there was a lot of things for the wedding.
I needed money to prepare for the wedding.
The process was difficult and expensive, but the wedding was interesting experience.
I will planning to save money again and live happily in the future!
강사 첨삭
Good day, Angela!
I understand how you feel here. They said that a wedding is like an investment, you have to spend money first then it goes back to you through gifts from your guests. I have always been a good saver. I plan something then I save it the moment the new year comes, because I might be needing it in the future :)\' Have a god day!
Aki~
I felt broke in last year. Because, there was a lot of things for the wedding.
>>> I felt broke in last year because there was a lot of things to do for the wedding.
I needed money to prepare for the wedding.
>>> CORRECT!
The process was difficult and expensive, but the wedding was interesting experience.
>>> The process was difficult and expensive, but the wedding was an interesting experience.
>>> The process was difficult and expensive, but the wedding was a memorable experience.
I will planning to save money again and live happily in the future!
>>> I plan to save money and live happily in the future.
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