When was the last time you got angry? Why did you get angry?
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-Teacher Elisha
last sunday, i got angry from my family.
>> Last Sunday, I got angry because of my family.
the incident occurred at the breakfast.
>> The incident occurred at breakfast.
my father wanted to make some ramen.
so i cooked it for my dad.
>> My father wanted to eat ramen so I cooked some for him.
usual, i prefer the less ripe noodles. so i cookd thing like that.
>> I usually prefer half-cooked noodles so I cooked it that way.
but my father said.\" it is the less ripe, i hate this!!\"
>> My father said, \"It\'s not cooked well, I hate this!\"
my sister said \"she can\'t cook well..\"
>> Correct!
or:
>> My sister said, \"She can\'t cook well.\"
my mother saud \" cann\'t only she cook? she can do nothing.\"
>> My mother said, \" Can\'t she cook? She can\'t do anything.\"
i was very dissapointed. so i got very angry.
>> Correct!
or:
>> I was very disappointed so I got very angry.
i have cooked for them something like fried pork, rosted chicken soup and curry!
>> I have cooked fried pork, roasted chicken soup and curry for them.
why they couldn\'t rememeber about that?
>> Why can\'t they remember that?
so i will not cook again for them!:(
>> I will never cook for them again.
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