When was the last time you got angry? Why did you get angry?

2018-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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last sunday, i got angry from my family. the incident occurred at the breakfast. my father wanted to make some ramen. so i cooked it for my dad. usual, i prefer the less ripe noodles. so i cookd thing like that. but my father said." it is the less ripe, i hate this!!" my sister said "she can't cook well.." my mother saud " cann't only she cook? she can do nothing." i was very dissapointed. so i got very angry. i have cooked for them something like fried pork, rosted chicken soup and curry! why they couldn't rememeber about that? so i will not cook again for them!:(

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. I felt sad while reading your homework. You must have been very upset because of what happened. Don\'t worry! If you cook for me, I\'ll make sure to eat it with a grateful heart! Cheer up!

-Teacher Elisha

 last sunday, i got angry from my family.

>> Last Sunday, I got angry because of my family.
 the incident occurred at the breakfast.

>> The incident occurred at breakfast.
 my father wanted to make some ramen.
 so i cooked it for my dad.

 >> My father wanted to eat ramen so I cooked some for him.
usual, i prefer the less ripe noodles. so i cookd thing like that.

>> I usually prefer half-cooked noodles so I cooked it that way.
 but my father said.\" it is the less ripe, i hate this!!\"

>> My father said, \"It\'s not cooked well, I hate this!\"
 my sister said \"she can\'t cook well..\"

>> Correct!

or:

>>  My sister said, \"She can\'t cook well.\"
 my mother saud \" cann\'t only she cook? she can do nothing.\"

>> My mother said, \" Can\'t she cook? She can\'t do anything.\"
 i was very dissapointed. so i got very angry.

>> Correct!

or:

>> I was very disappointed so I got very angry.
 i have cooked for them something like fried pork, rosted chicken soup and curry!

>> I have cooked fried pork, roasted chicken soup and curry for them.

why they couldn\'t rememeber about that?

>> Why can\'t they remember that?
 so i will not cook again for them!:(

>> I will never cook for them again.

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