When was the last time you got sick? Write about it.
학생이 쓴 원문
I got sick one year ago lastly. I go outside but the weather was too cold. But I didn\'t wear the clothes to avoid the cold . So I get sick. I will wear enough clothes at cold days.
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- Teacher Debbie
I got sick one year ago lastly.
>> I got sick one year ago.
I go outside but the weather was too cold.
>> I went outside, but the weather was too cold.
But I didn\'t wear the clothes to avoid the cold. So I get sick.
>> I wasn\'t wearing thick clothes to keep me warm, so I got sick.
I will wear enough clothes at cold days.
>> I will wear thick clothes on cold days.
- Teacher Debbie
I got sick one year ago lastly.
>> I got sick one year ago.
I go outside but the weather was too cold.
>> I went outside, but the weather was too cold.
But I didn\'t wear the clothes to avoid the cold. So I get sick.
>> I wasn\'t wearing thick clothes to keep me warm, so I got sick.
I will wear enough clothes at cold days.
>> I will wear thick clothes on cold days.
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