When was the last time you ran out of patience with someone?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear teacher Sheila
Hi there!
In Philippines, there was a strong earthquake.
I\'m sorry to hear that. I hope proceed swiftly restoration.
Writing Task: When was the last time you ran out of patience with someone?
I feel generation gap to 20s workers.
20s worker thinking method different from my mind.
I was disappointed in 20s workers.
Because they normally say what everything wants to say.
It\'s lack manners.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Tony!
Have you seen the news about the earthquake?
Fortunately, it was far from my area.
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
>>I feel the generation gap to workers aging in their 20\'s.
20s worker thinking method different from my mind.
>>Workers in their 20\'s thinking method is different from mine.
I was disappointed in 20s workers.
>>I am disappointed with workers in their 20\'s
Because they normally say what everything wants to say.
>>Because they normally say everything they want to say.
It\'s lack manners.
>>They lack manners.
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