When was the last time you visited a famous building? What was it like?

I bet these skyscrapers are the finest in the world, Sir [이름]!

There were some minor flaws like the use of articles , but you can work on it. See you in class!

~Teacher Eunice

It has been almost two years I have visited the Buj Khailfa building in UAE which is the tallest building in the world.

>>> It has been almost two years since I had visited the Buj Khailfa building in the UAE which is the tallest building in the world.

I saw the beautiful water fountain show just in front of the building with lovely song and had a great dinner with my family.

>>> I saw the beautiful water fountain show just in front of the building with lovely songs and had a great dinner with my family.  

There were a lot of people gathered from all the world, because there are many attractions near the building. 

>>> There were a lot of people gathered from all over the world because there were many attractions near the building. 

The Buj Khalifa and Buj Al Arab is the landmark in UAE, so tourist can see a lot of things , eat the one of the most delicious menu and go shopping in the biggest mall in the world.

>>> The Buj Khalifa and Buj Al Arab are the landmarks in the UAE, so tourists can see a lot of things, eat one of the most delicious menu and go shopping in the biggest malls in the world.

It was not much cloud in the mall when I visited there.

>>> It was not much crowded in the mall when I visited there.  

Most things are good for me, but one thing that I regret is that I didn\'t go to the top of the building because of the expensive admission fee.
>>> correct!

>>> OR: There are a lot of things to enjoy in Dubai, but one thing I regret the most is that I wasn\'t able to go up to the top of the building because of the expensive admission fee.

Now, I am thinking about the money that I spent before and realize that it would be nothing, because I would compensate it with my salary.
>>> Now, I am thinking about the money I am going to spend before and realized that it\'s not a big deal, because I would compensate it back anyway. 

That\'s why I would spend the money, if I took a trip. 

>>> That\'s why I would spend money if I ever go on a trip. 

That is my motto of the travel.

>>> That is my motto for traveling.

>>> OR: This is my travel credo.