When was the last time you went to a good restaurant? What did you have?
학생이 쓴 원문
My husband and I like going to a Japaneses restaurant named \" THE SUSHI\".
Two weeks ago,we went there, had a sushi set menu made of raw fish,
shrimps,calms,salmon,grilled eel and fried egg.
We also added Japanese Miso soup and Udong.
We enjoyed eating them.
강사 첨삭
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My husband and I like going to a Japaneses restaurant named \" THE SUSHI\".
>> Correct
Two weeks ago,we went there, had a sushi set menu made of raw fish, shrimps,calms,salmon,grilled eel and fried egg.
Two weeks ago,we went there, had a sushi set menu made of raw fish, shrimps,calms,salmon,grilled eel and fried egg.
>> Two weeks ago, we went there, had a sushi set menu made up of raw fish, shrimp, clams, salmon, grilled eel and fried egg.
We also added Japanese Miso soup and Udong.
We also added Japanese Miso soup and Udong.
>> Correct
We enjoyed eating them.
We enjoyed eating them.
>> Correct
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