When was the last time you went to the beach? Where did you go?
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The last time I went to be beach was when I was in England.
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It was my summer vacation and I could have chance to travel around Europe.
>>> It was my summer vacation and I was given a chance to travel around Europe.
Before my trip, I was for a long time in Germany where has scarcely any sea but land.
>>> Before my trip, I was staying in Germany for quite some time and they don\'t have a lot of water but instead they have lands all over.
While I was traveling in England, I would like to visit somewhere, in which have a see shore, at least at once.
>>> While I was travelling in England, I would like to visit some place in which I can see a sea shore.
I choosed to go Brighten and it was a very nice decision.
>>> I chose to go to Britain and it was a very good decision.
I was alone and didn’t prepare some clothes to change.
>>> I was alone and didn\'t prepare a lot of clothes.
So I could’t get into the sea but just looking at the beautiful sea shore was enough for me.
>>> So I couldn\'t really dip in the ocean but just looking at the beautiful sea shore was enough for me.
There were a lot of people and seagulls.
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Everyone was enjoy their time and chatted with each other.
>>> Everyone was having a good time and you can see everyone chatting with each other.
It was chearful and peaceful.
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I visited some bookstores and clothes stores.
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I drink some tea in some café as well.
>>> I drank some tea in a coffee shop as well.
In the late afternoon, I should come back to Lundon, but it was one of the most beautiful day in my life.
>>> In the late afternoon, I should come back to London but when I think of it I always thought of it as one of the best experience I had in my life.
I really miss there.
>>> I really miss it there.
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