When was the last time you went to the beach? Where did you go?

2019-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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When was the last time you went to the beach? Where did you go? The last time I went to be beach was when I was in England. It was my summer vacation and I could have chance to travel around Europe. Before my trip, I was for a long time in Germany where has scarcely any sea but land. While I was traveling in England, I would like to visit somewhere, in which have a see shore, at least at once. I choosed to go Brighten and it was a very nice decision. I was alone and didn’t prepare some clothes to change. So I could’t get into the sea but just looking at the beautiful sea shore was enough for me. There were a lot of people and seagulls. Everyone was enjoy their time and chatted with each other. It was chearful and peaceful. I visited some bookstores and clothes stores. I drink some tea in some café as well. In the late afternoon, I should come back to Lundon, but it was one of the most beautiful day in my life. I really miss there.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^



The last time I went to be beach was when I was in England.

>>> correct


It was my summer vacation and I could have chance to travel around Europe.

>>> It was my summer vacation and I was given a chance to travel around Europe.


Before my trip, I was for a long time in Germany where has scarcely any sea but land.

>>> Before my trip, I was staying in Germany for quite some time and they don\'t have a lot of water but instead they have lands all over.


While I was traveling in England, I would like to visit somewhere, in which have a see shore, at least at once.

>>> While I was travelling in England, I would like to visit some place in which I can see a sea shore.


I choosed to go Brighten and it was a very nice decision.

>>> I chose to go to Britain and it was a very good decision.


I was alone and didn’t prepare some clothes to change.

>>> I was alone and didn\'t prepare a lot of clothes.


So I could’t get into the sea but just looking at the beautiful sea shore was enough for me.

>>> So I couldn\'t really dip in the ocean but just looking at the beautiful sea shore was enough for me.


There were a lot of people and seagulls.

>>> correct


Everyone was enjoy their time and chatted with each other.

>>> Everyone was having a good time and you can see everyone chatting with each other.


 It was chearful and peaceful.

>>> correct


I visited some bookstores and clothes stores.

>>> correct


I drink some tea in some café as well.

>>> I drank some tea in  a coffee shop as well.


In the late afternoon, I should come back to Lundon, but it was one of the most beautiful day in my life.

>>> In the late afternoon, I should come back to London but  when I think of it I always thought of it as one of the best experience I had in my life.


I really miss there.

>>> I really miss it there.

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