When was the most stressful time of your life? Did you learn anything from that experience?

2020-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

학생이 쓴 원문

i am remembering one of the stress full time. when i worked in guesthouse in Busan, The guesthouse belongs to my friend\'s parents. my friend recommended me to his parents and then i could work there. one day my friend visited guest house while i worked in and he want me to improve my English skill. suddenly he did role playing. i actually didn\'t have confidence and didn\'t ready about that. he keep asking question like customer again and again. it felt really pressure, not kidding he forward to my face and shout out asking asking asking... he didn\'t give time. i was embarrassed first time and then really pressure, felt bothering. it was really stressful and terrible. i want to punch his face to be honest. i did stand for it because he is my owner\'s son haha. Then suddenly, tears came down. i was really sad, depressed, just all kinds of negative thins came to me. few minutes later, my friend apologized to me and the i decided i will master english one day, i will keep studying english

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],
This is in a nice story. It is a bit sad, but I\'m glad that you took the challenge positively, and I hope you keep pushing yourself to do better because I know you can. Great job for this story!
-Rachel 
i am remembering one of the stress full time.
>> I remember one of my stressful times. 
when i worked in guesthouse in Busan.
>> correct
>> It was when I worked in a guesthouse in Busan.
The guesthouse belongs to my friend\'s parents.
>> correct
my friend recommended me to his parents and then i could work there.
>> correct
>> I got recommended by my friend to work for his parents\' guest house. 
one day my friend visited guest house while i worked in 
and he want me to improve my English skill.
>> One day my friend visited the place while I worked, and he wanted me to practice my English skill.
suddenly he did role playing. i actually didn\'t have confidence and didn\'t ready about that.
>> Suddenly we were doing role playing, and I didn\'t have confidence and wasn\'t ready. 
he keep asking question like customer again and again.
>> He kept asking me questions like a customer does repeatedly. 
it felt really pressure, not kidding he forward to my face and shout out asking asking asking...
>> I was pressured, and he even talked to me in my face, shouted and kept asking questions. 
he didn\'t give time.
>> He didn\'t give me time to collect my thoughts. 
i was embarrassed first time and then really pressure, felt bothering.
>> Initially I was embarrassed, then I felt pressured and bothered.
it was really stressful and terrible.
>> correct
i want to punch his face to be honest.
>> I wanted to punch his face to be honest. 
i did stand for it because he is my owner\'s son haha.
>> Buy I held back because he is my owner\'s son.
Then suddenly, tears came down.
>> correct
i was really sad, depressed, just all kinds of negative things came to me.
>> correct
few minutes later, my friend apologized to me and the i decided i will master english one day, i will keep studying english
>> A few minutes later, my friend apologized to me and from then on, I decided to to master the English language, so I have to keep studying and practicing. 

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·