When was your most embarrassing moment? What happened?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, I never forgot at this moment.
I received welcome Korea army notice.
In korea is mandatory for men.
At that time, the whole world was about to collapse.
It is very embarrassing moment to me.
강사 첨삭
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>>When I was young, I never forgot a moment.
I received welcome Korea army notice.
>>I received the notice of welcome from the Korean army.
In korea is mandatory for men.
>>In Korea, it is mandatory for men to join the army.
At that time, the whole world was about to collapse.
>>CORRECT
It is very embarrassing moment to me.
>>It was a very embarrassing moment for me.
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