When you are sad how do you make yourself feel better?(ANSWER)

2018-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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Usually, I told why I'm so sad to my mom. Because I think my mom is the prsn who can relate my feelings the most. When I told all the storys to mom, I feel refreshed. But, my feelings are not be better, I go to my room and think why I'm sad, and the solution to make feel better. Also, I try to forget the situation witch is the reason that I'm sad. :) -END-

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

When you are sad how do you make yourself feel better?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

Usually, I told why I\'m so sad to my mom.
Because I think my mom is the prsn who can relate my feelings the most.
When I told all the storys to mom, I feel refreshed.
But, my feelings are not be better, I go to my room and think why I\'m sad, and the solution to make feel better.
Also, I try to forget the situation witch is the reason that I\'m sad.
:)

             

 

CORRECTIONS:

 

Usually, I am telling my mom why I\'m so sad.
Because I think my mom is the
person who can relate to my feelings the most.
When I told all the
stories to mom, I feel refreshed.
But, my feelings
don’t get better. I go to my room and think why I\'m sad, and think of the solution to make me feel better.
Also, I
tried to forget the situation which resulted me to feel sad. :)     

 

 

** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. J  Please take note of the corrections.

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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