When you are sad how do you make yourself feel better?(ANSWER)
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HOMEWORK:
When you are sad how do you make yourself feel better?
Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
Usually, I told why I\'m so sad to my mom.
Because I think my mom is the prsn who can relate my feelings the most.
When I told all the storys to mom, I feel refreshed.
But, my feelings are not be better, I go to my room and think why I\'m sad,
and the solution to make feel better.
Also, I try to forget the situation witch is the reason that I\'m sad.
:)
CORRECTIONS:
Usually, I am telling my mom why I\'m so sad.
Because I think my mom is the person who can relate to my feelings the most.
When I told all the stories to mom, I feel refreshed.
But, my feelings don’t get better. I go to my room and think why I\'m sad, and think of the solution to make me feel better.
Also, I tried to forget the situation which resulted
me to feel sad. :)
** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. J Please take note of the corrections.
Cheers!! Take care. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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