When you are sad how do you make yourself feel better? Please answer in complete sentences.

2018-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

학생이 쓴 원문

When my felling is sad then I play basketball to make better. because when I play basketball and sweat it feel better.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

When you are sad how do you make yourself feel better? Please answer in complete sentences.

 

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

When my felling is sad then I play basketball to make better. because when I play basketball and sweat it feel better.

 

CORRECTIONS:

When my feeling is sad, I play basketball to make me feel better. Because when I play basketball and sweat, it feels good.

 

 

 

 





 

** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. J  Please take note of the corrections. ^^

See you in our class. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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