When you are stessed or tired, what do you do for relax?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I\'m stressed, I in my room.
And I\'m stressed, I breathe in.
When I\'m tired, I bear is I\'m in the another bilding.
And I\'m tired, I maybe play with my younger sister.
These are when I stressed or tired, I do relax.
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T. DON
When I\'m stressed, I in my room.
And I\'m stressed, I breathe in.
When I\'m tired, I bear is I\'m in the another bilding.
And I\'m tired, I maybe play with my younger sister.
These are when I stressed or tired, I do relax.
And I\'m stressed, I breathe in.
When I\'m tired, I bear is I\'m in the another bilding.
And I\'m tired, I maybe play with my younger sister.
These are when I stressed or tired, I do relax.
>> When I\'m stressed, I stayed in my room and I breathe in. When I\'m tired, I think I\'m in another building and sometimes I maybe play with my younger sister. These are the things that I do to relax when I\'m stressed or tired.
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