When you are stressed, how do you feel physically?
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When I get stress, I have a lot of anger in my [이름]d. So I try to avoid meet people because I don’t want to make them hurt from my words. One of my stress reliever is watching baseball game with delicious food. While the playing, I shout a cheerleading song. That makes me feel free even if we lose our game haha. Another way is getting some sleep. When I wake up with fulfill rest, I just forget about stress thing. Also, it’s good for my health. But the best way is do not get stress a lot. So I’m thinking positively, easily, and making smile a lot.
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Hello [이름] [이름]!
As expected, you wrote another good composition. Please keep up the good work! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
So I try to avoid meet people because I don’t want to make them hurt from my words.
>>So I try to avoid meeting people because I don’t want to hurt them with my words.
One of my stress reliever is watching baseball game with delicious food.
>>One of my stress relievers is watching baseball games with delicious food.
While the playing, I shout a cheerleading song.
>>While they are playing, I shout cheers for them.
That makes me feel free even if we lose our game haha.
>>CORRECT!
Another way is getting some sleep.
>>CORRECT!
When I wake up with fulfill rest, I just forget about stress thing.
>>When I wake up after a good sleep, I just forget about the thing that stresses me out.
Also, it’s good for my health.
>>CORRECT!
But the best way is do not get stress a lot.
>>But the best way is to not get stressed a lot.
So I’m thinking positively, easily, and making smile a lot.
>>So I’m thinking positively, calmly, and smiling a lot.
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