When you are tasked to do a project, do you collect ideas from other people? Explain in 5 sentences.
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Here are some of my corrections.
When working, I generally organize the first things myselfs if there is no upper pressure from my boss.
>> When I’m working, I generally organize myself first if there is no pressure from my boss.
The main reason for this is that I tend to be esaily affected by other person who gvies me the idea.
>> The main reason for this is I tend to be easily affected by others who give me the idea.
Therefore, I have tried to build up my own structure first and get feedback from colleagues on what parts of my first draft seems to be revised to make it batter.
>> Therefore, I have tried to build up my own idea and I will get some feedback from my colleagues on what parts of my draft will be revised to make it better.
Sometimes, I found myself blaming someone in my mind without knowing when something affected by someone\'s idea goes wrong.
>> Sometimes, I found myself blaming someone in my mind without knowing someone is affected by his/her wrong ideas.
To prevent this bad habiture, Doing everything myself is my first priority.
>> To prevent this bad habit, I’m doing everything for myself as my first priority.
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