When you ask someone for a favor, what are the things you should keep in mind to make sure they say
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To make sure they say yes, I should be polite when I need someone’s helps even who is close with me. In addition, I should check they are busy or not and ask them for helping when they aren’t busy. Probably, catching their mood or atmosphere is the most important to get other’s hand. To be honestly, I don’t feel like to ask someone for helping. As I get some problems of anything what I could have, I start to solve that by my self. After than, If it isn’t still fixed I would ask someone who is capable of solving problems to help me. That’s a way that people think It’s their pleasure to help the others.
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Thank you for this Yoon!
To make sure they say yes, I should be polite when I need someone’s helps even who is close with me.
>>> To make sure they say yes, I should be polite when I need someone’s help even to those who are close with me.
In addition, I should check they are busy or not and ask them for helping when they aren’t busy.
>>> In addition, I should check if they are busy or not and ask them for help when they aren’t busy.
Probably, catching their mood or atmosphere is the most important to get other’s hand.
>>> OR: Probably, catching their mood or atmosphere is the most important to get a hand.
To be honestly, I don’t feel like to ask someone for helping.
>>> To be honestly, I don’t feel like asking someone for help.
As I get some problems of anything what I could have, I start to solve that by my self.
>>> As I get more problems of anything that I could have, I start to solve that by myself.
After than, If it isn’t still fixed I would ask someone who is capable of solving problems to help me.
>>> After that, if it isn’t still fixed I would ask someone who is capable of solving problems to help me.
That’s a way that people think it’s their pleasure to help the others.
>>> correct
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