When you have a problem, who is the first person you think of and why?

2015-08-10 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Whenever I have a problem, I think of my family first and try to solve it by myself without letting them know it. Actually, I am an adult, farther of my daughter and husband of my wife. I am a man who should be strong and support my family. I should be the first and last person in my family to rely on. However, I don’t have anyone I can get help from when I am in trouble. As my father and mother did everything for me when I had a problem when I was younger, it is not my turn to be a reliable head of my family. As a breadwinner, I sometimes feel lonely because I don’t have anyone to consult with or to share my burden with. I have to endure all the hardships by myself until the last minute. My family is something gives me hope, happiness and reasons for my being. However, it is a simultaneously huge burden for me. I cannot be sick, neither should be weak for my family. I think it is common for all the fathers and husbands in all of the world.

강사 첨삭

Hello again Sir [이름]. ^^

I admire you for being a great father and husband to your wife.

And also as a son to your parents.
It is because of your stories.

I am so thankful that you trust me with some personal matters too.

I do understand your situation, I can be the person whom you can share your problems with. ^^

Don\'t worry, it will be for keeps.

Have a great week ahead of you.

Teacher Nina


Whenever I have a problem, I think of my family first and try to solve it by myself without letting them know it.

>> correct

Actually, I am an adult, farther of my daughter and husband of my wife.

>> correct (spelling check: father ^^)

I am a man who should be strong and support my family.

>> correct

I should be the first and last person in my family to rely on.

>> correct

However, I don’t have anyone I can get help from when I am in trouble.

>> correct

As my father and mother did everything for me when I had a problem when I was younger, it is not my turn to be a reliable head of my family.

>> correct

As a breadwinner, I sometimes feel lonely because I don’t have anyone to consult with or to share my burden with.

>> correct

I have to endure all the hardships by myself until the last minute.

>> correct

My family is something gives me hope, happiness and reasons for my being.

>> correct

However, it is a simultaneously huge burden for me.

>> correct

I cannot be sick, neither should be weak for my family.

>> correct

I think it is common for all the fathers and husbands in all of the world.

>> I think it is common for all the fathers and husbands all over the world.

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