When you have a problem, who is the first person you think of and why?
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Hello again Sir [이름]. ^^
I admire you for being a great father and husband to your wife.
And also as a son to your parents.
It is because of your stories.
I am so thankful that you trust me with some personal matters too.
I do understand your situation, I can be the person whom you can share your problems with. ^^
Don\'t worry, it will be for keeps.
Have a great week ahead of you.
Teacher Nina
Whenever I have a problem, I think of my family first and try to solve it by myself without letting them know it.
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Actually, I am an adult, farther of my daughter and husband of my wife.
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I am a man who should be strong and support my family.
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I should be the first and last person in my family to rely on.
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However, I don’t have anyone I can get help from when I am in trouble.
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As my father and mother did everything for me when I had a problem when I was younger, it is not my turn to be a reliable head of my family.
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As a breadwinner, I sometimes feel lonely because I don’t have anyone to consult with or to share my burden with.
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I have to endure all the hardships by myself until the last minute.
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My family is something gives me hope, happiness and reasons for my being.
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However, it is a simultaneously huge burden for me.
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I cannot be sick, neither should be weak for my family.
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I think it is common for all the fathers and husbands in all of the world.
>> I think it is common for all the fathers and husbands all over the world.
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