When you think of peace, what image do you think of? Where is the most peaceful place you know of?

What a lovely place, Sir [이름]!

While I was reading your composition, I was able to imagine a great view in the beach. Hihihi.

It is really nice to relax and have fun with our loved ones.

Thanks for sending this in today.

I felt relaxed after imagining those places you described.

Let us hope that we can go to a wonderful place soon.

Teacher Nina

When I think of peace, the image of a family that consists of farther, mother and a little boy and takes a walk hand-in-hand with a big smile in a park under the bright sun comes to my mind.

>> Did you mean: When  I think of peace, the image of a family that consists of father, mother and a little boy who takes a walk hand-in-hand with a big smile in a park under the bright sun comes to my mind.

>> When  I think of peace, I imagine a complete family who walks hand-in-hand with a big smile in a park under the bright sun.

They look so peaceful and happy.

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It seems that there is nothing that worries the family and the world.

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>> It seems that they don\'t have any worries.

There are also people who lie down in the grass without disturbance, totally isolated from the hustle of the people around.

>> There are also people who lie down on the grass without disturbance and totally isolated from the hustle of the people around.

The most peaceful place is in my mind.

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It is the imaginary place where there is a long beach surrounded by the beautiful ocean.

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>> It is an imaginary place where there is a long beach which is surrounded by a beautiful ocean.

The color of sea water is so blue and bright so that you can even see a flock of fish swimming under the water without going snorkeling.

>> The water is the sea is so blue and bright that you can even see a flock of fish swimming without going snorkeling.

The sand on the beach is so beautiful, soft and silky so that you will feel like you are flying in the sky.

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At evening, you will enjoy watching the many colors of the sunset and the view from the ocean will be out of sight.

>> At night, you will enjoy watching the colors of the sunset and the view of the ocean that will be out of sight.

You don’t need a mobile phone and you are completely free from all of the daily hustle-bustle.

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