When you travel, would you rather go to a place where there are a lot of people or to a place where
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If I travel foreign countries, than I rather go to a place where there are a lot of people.
Because if somewhere has a lot of travelers, that means that there is a hot place to travel.
And also if there are a lot of people where I go, then the danger of crime goes down either.
Because of these reasons, I rather go to a place where a lot of people are if I am going to travel foreign countries.
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>>If I travel to foreign countries, then I\'d rather go to a place where there are a lot of people.
Because if somewhere has a lot of travelers, that means that there is a hot place to travel.
Because if somewhere has a lot of travelers, that means that there is a hot place to travel.
>>Because if a place has a lot of travelers, that means that it has a hot place for travelers.
And also if there are a lot of people where I go, then the danger of crime goes down either.
And also if there are a lot of people where I go, then the danger of crime goes down either.
>>And also if there are a lot of people where I go, then the danger of crime goes down too.
Because of these reasons, I rather go to a place where a lot of people are if I am going to travel foreign countries.
Because of these reasons, I rather go to a place where a lot of people are if I am going to travel foreign countries.
>>Because of these reasons, I\'d rather go to a place where a lot of people are if I am going to travel to foreign countries.
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