When you were a child, what did you want to be when you grew up?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was middie stuent I want to be a English teacher but I coudn\'t study because
my parents were very poor . I have to save money from when I was young.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju Mi! I think you had a very challenging childhood, but you persevered and worked hard to get where you are now. I’m proud of you. Enjoy your day!
~T. Jewel
When I was middie stuent I want to be a English teacher but I coudn\'t study because my parents were very poor .
>>When I was a middle school student, I wanted to be an English teacher, but I couldn’t study because my parents were very poor.
I have to save money from when I was young.
>>I had to save money when I was young.
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