When you were a child, what did you want to be when you grew up?
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When i was a child, I wanted to be an English teacher.
>>When I was a child, I wanted to be an English teacher.
>>OR: When I was young, I dreamed about becoming an English teacher.
I first learned Englsilh, when i was 10.
>>I first learned English, when I was 10 years old.
>>OR:I learned how to speak in English for the first time when I was 10 years old.
Since the, I\'m interested in English.
>>Since then, I haven been interested in English.
So, I want to learn more it.
>>So, I wanted to learn more about it.
>>OR: That\'s why I wanted to acquire more knowledge about it.
After the lapse of time, when I entered the university, I choose the English major.
>>After the lapse of time, I enrolled in a university where I chose English as my major.
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