When you were a child, what did you want to grow up to be? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
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When I was a child, I want to be a movie director. Because I like to watch movies a lot. Also I want to involve the making films. Even I tried to attending a University majoring in that, it is too hard for me to make me giving up to be a director. Now I find other way for living, some time I though about my childhood\\\'s dream.
By the way, I rally thank you for hearing my speak, despite it is barely some kinds of sound not a communication.:) I rally want to speak very well as my writing at least. But my brain and mouth couldn\\\'t help me. Plus I don\\\'t know how to make a sentence when you asked me about the questions. I know you\\\'re not the specialize on IELTS. But I keep remembering your kindness when you tested on me. That\\\'s the reason why I choose you as my tutor. So if you don\\\'t mind, can you check the IELTS speaking rules for me? It would make us more comfortable class rather than today\\\'s one. Bye~
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Hey, Karl. Thank you for the message. I appreciate it very much^^ I just want to clarify the IELTS speaking rules though. Do you want us to follow the speaking rules or skip some pages like what we discussed earlier in class? ^^ Let\'s talk about it in class tomorrow. Have a great evening! ~Jane c\",)
When I was a child, I want to be a movie director.
>> When I was a child, I wanted to be a movie director.
Because I like to watch movies a lot.
>> CORRECT =)
Also I want to involve the making films.
>> Also, I want to be involved in making films.
Even I tried to attending a University majoring in that, it is too hard for me to make me giving up to be a director.
>> I even tried to attend a university and major in Filmmaking because it was too hard for me to give up my dream to be a director.
Now I find other way for living, some time I though about my childhood\\\'s dream.
>> Now I find other ways for a living but sometimes I still think about my childhood dream.
By the way, I rally thank you for hearing my speak, despite it is barely some kinds of sound not a communication.:)
>> By the way, I really thank you for listening to how I speak despite it being some kind of sound, not communication.
I rally want to speak very well as my writing at least.
>> I really want to speak very well as well as write at least.
But my brain and mouth couldn\\\'t help me.
>> But my brain and mouth couldn\'t help me.
Plus I don\\\'t know how to make a sentence when you asked me about the questions.
>> Plus I do not know how to make a sentence when you asked me some questions.
I know you\\\'re not the specialize on IELTS. But I keep remembering your kindness when you tested on me.
>> I know you don\'t specialize in IELTS but I keep remembering your kindness when you gave me the test.
That\\\'s the reason why I choose you as my tutor.
>> That is the reason I chose you as my tutor.
So if you don\\\'t mind, can you check the IELTS speaking rules for me?
>> So if you don\'t mind, can you check the IELTS speaking rules for me?
It would make us more comfortable class rather than today\\\'s one. Bye~
>> It would make our class more comfortable than today\'s. Bye~
When I was a child, I want to be a movie director.
>> When I was a child, I wanted to be a movie director.
Because I like to watch movies a lot.
>> CORRECT =)
Also I want to involve the making films.
>> Also, I want to be involved in making films.
Even I tried to attending a University majoring in that, it is too hard for me to make me giving up to be a director.
>> I even tried to attend a university and major in Filmmaking because it was too hard for me to give up my dream to be a director.
Now I find other way for living, some time I though about my childhood\\\'s dream.
>> Now I find other ways for a living but sometimes I still think about my childhood dream.
By the way, I rally thank you for hearing my speak, despite it is barely some kinds of sound not a communication.:)
>> By the way, I really thank you for listening to how I speak despite it being some kind of sound, not communication.
I rally want to speak very well as my writing at least.
>> I really want to speak very well as well as write at least.
But my brain and mouth couldn\\\'t help me.
>> But my brain and mouth couldn\'t help me.
Plus I don\\\'t know how to make a sentence when you asked me about the questions.
>> Plus I do not know how to make a sentence when you asked me some questions.
I know you\\\'re not the specialize on IELTS. But I keep remembering your kindness when you tested on me.
>> I know you don\'t specialize in IELTS but I keep remembering your kindness when you gave me the test.
That\\\'s the reason why I choose you as my tutor.
>> That is the reason I chose you as my tutor.
So if you don\\\'t mind, can you check the IELTS speaking rules for me?
>> So if you don\'t mind, can you check the IELTS speaking rules for me?
It would make us more comfortable class rather than today\\\'s one. Bye~
>> It would make our class more comfortable than today\'s. Bye~
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