when you were a child, what things were you afraid of?

2019-02-12 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

학생이 쓴 원문

First, I'm afraid people because if they don't like me and they judge by appearance. Second, I'm afraid worm because its are very gross. Third, I'm afraid ghost because if Ghost that have scary face follow me.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! Thank you for sending me your homework.

See you later! ~T. Elisha

First, I\'m afraid people
because if they don\'t like me and they judge by appearance.
>> First, I used to be afraid of people because if they don\'t like me, they would judge my appearance.

Second, I\'m afraid worm
because its are very gross.
>> Second, I used to be afraid of worms because they are very gross.
Third, I\'m afraid ghost
because if Ghost that have scary face follow me.

>> Third, I used to be afraid of ghosts because it has a scary face and it might follow me.

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