When you were a child, what was your dream for the future? Has it changed?
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Hi! Yeong.
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When I was a child, my dream wasn’t clearly such as soldier, doctor and etc. when I 13 years old, I really love to watch world map in the book.
>> When I was a child, my dream wasn’t clearly because I want to be a soldier, doctor and etc. when I was 13 years old, I really love to look the world map in the book.
Whenever watch the world map I always imagined that world travel, meet foreigner and business trip. In addition I always believe my imagination.
>> Whenever I am looking at the world map I always imagined that world is big and I want to travel, meet foreigners and to have a business trip. In addition, I always believe that imagination will come true.
My dream is the same as when I was a child. I believe my dreams come ture
>> My dream is still the same when I was a child and I believe my dreams will come true
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