When you were a child, what was your dream for the future? Has it changed?

2018-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

학생이 쓴 원문

When I was child, my dream is becoming a polit. But there don’t have various way in Korea. Beside I didn’t study well. So someday when I earn a lot of money or win the lottery, I will go to the another country and learn about flight control. And then I want to get my pilot’s license.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. See you tomorrow! ~T.Elisha

When I was child, my dream is becoming a polit.

>> When I was a child, I dreamt of becoming a pilot.

But there don’t have various way in Korea.

>> But, there aren\'t much choices I can choose from in Korea.

Beside I didn’t study well.

>> Besides, I didn’t study well.

So someday when I earn a lot of money or win the lottery, I will go to the another country and learn about flight control.

>> Someday, when I earn a lot of money or when I win the lottery, I will go to another country to learn about flight control.

And then I want to get my pilot’s license.

>> Correct!

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