When you were a kid, what were you afraid of?
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Well, I guess when I was child, I couldn\'t sleep alone. So, I used to do it with someone who is my sister or mum. At that time, I felt someone looked at me while I was sleeping. I believe most of kids tend to do it. Also, I really afraid of spider [이름]ce I watched the spider-man of movie. And it looks like very gross thing. :)
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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Well, I guess when I was child, I couldn\'t sleep alone.
>> CORRECT!So, I used to do it with someone who is my sister or mum.
>> CORRECT!At that time, I felt someone looked at me while I was sleeping.
>> CORRECT!I believe most of kids tend to do it.
>> I believe most kids tend to do it.
Also, I really afraid of spider [이름]ce I watched the spider-man of movie.
>> Also, I was really afraid of spiders [이름]ce I watched the movie, Spider Man.
And it looks like very gross thing. :)
>> And it looks like a very gross thing. :)
(I think there are insects that are as disgusting as spiders. Haha! ~ T. Camille)
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