When you were little, what was your favorite thing to do?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, I used to play the baseball and basketball. Most likely the thing what I played is the basketball during the lunch break time. Just hanging out with my friends that I really miss. And, another one is a date of long distance. She\'s older than me with a year. When she got hired to work far way from me, I always took a subway for meeting her for 3 hours. In the first time, I thought \'I\'m okay, that would be a worth!\'. But, as time went, my mind was changed. :)
강사 첨삭
Wonderful Monday, Elic! If it is your dream to change the world, then keep learning. Education is the most efficient key to effect the change you desire to see in the world. The more you keep learning the more you discover new things and explore new opportunities. I am always here for you. ^^
Well, I used to play the baseball and basketball.
>>> Well, I used to play baseball and basketball.
Most likely the thing what I played is the basketball during the lunch break time.
>>> Most likely, the thing I played was basketball during the lunch break.
Just hanging out with my friends that I really miss.
>>> CORRECT.
And, another one is a date of long distance.
>>> And another one is a long-distance date.
She\'s older than me with a year.
>>> She\'s a year older than me.
When she got hired to work far way from me, I always took a subway for meeting her for 3 hours.
>>> When she got hired to work far away from me, I always took the subway to meet her for 3 hours.
In the first time, I thought \'I\'m okay, that would be a worth!
>>> For the first time, I thought, I\'m okay, that would be worth it!
But, as time went, my mind was changed.
>>> But as time went by, my mind changed.
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